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choke rehash by =cheezopath:iconcheezopath:

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Submitted: February 28, 2007
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Here we go!

Just gonna submit now, I'll add the dream later, cant find the sheet of the paper.

Basically I'm in a huge house and a very laid back party is going on. George (a guy I knew last year) hands me a sandwich. I'm naked. I start eating the sandwich and taste something weird. George is smiling at me. I ask why he's smiling, and he replies that he put worms in the sandwich. I look down andthe sandwich is crawling. I run to the kitchen and hack the wriggling chunks of worm onto the floor.

YAY!

more to follow
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~irksomeoyster:iconirksomeoyster: Feb 28, 2007, 8:46:49 AM
You've got a great sense of light direction and atmosphere, I get a kind of menacing feel from this piece, and after reading the description, sounds like that's what you intended. :) Ok, and since you said "advanced critique encouraged", I'm gonna get nitpicky here :P haha First- I didn't even notice the worm until after I read the description, might be more noticeable if you added a few more, would help get the story across better, imho. The hand on the floor doesn't seem quite as sophisticated as the rest of the figure, but I think if you just refined the lines, while still keeping it gestural, it would look awesome. :D That's all, great work! :clap:
=cheezopath:iconcheezopath: Feb 28, 2007, 8:50:28 AM
Nice one dude, I always check advanced, rarely get it. I'll have a look at those points! Thanks again :)

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~dragonfish09:icondragonfish09: Feb 28, 2007, 7:08:50 PM
Great work on the light. Ever think you had really screwed up dreams, they also involve sex, or something stranger.

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~nangapanda:iconnangapanda: Feb 28, 2007, 9:11:51 PM
fuck dude, nice work. Just needs a little more definition in places (mostly the figure) and you've nailed it. Nice creepy atmosphere & light. Slightly strange perspective in it, mostly the floorboards, they seem to slope down, and the cupboard on the right foreground looks a bit wrong, but otherwise it kicks ass.

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=cheezopath:iconcheezopath: Feb 28, 2007, 9:54:46 PM
Just last night I dreamt I was fucking a pelvis and spine. I have plenty of fucked up sex ones - they'll be posted soon enough :P

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=cheezopath:iconcheezopath: Feb 28, 2007, 10:45:15 PM
Cheers buddy, I'll take that into consideration - probably gonna do a bit of cleanup before use in the project, so I'll have a chance to fix the perspective and add some definition then. Nice one.

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~MAD-Uninc:iconMAD-Uninc: Aug 23, 2007, 4:08:20 PM
Before I read the description, I thought he got up in the middle of the night for one more residual blast of the hash pipe (on the floor), bugged out and choked on it.
=cheezopath:iconcheezopath: Aug 23, 2007, 5:06:54 PM
haha, I wouldn't put it past me :)

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~dawno:icondawno: Aug 26, 2007, 5:06:51 PM
The lighting in this piece is fantastic! I really like the composition, and again, the concept. Dreams really make for wonderful art!
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